For the Intro, you need to set the scene - which it looks like you're doing. BC and its geography and demographics, what is involved in the aviation industry (why is it needed and growing in BC)

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Aviation in B.C

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Introduction

A.           Aviation ( Definition, relevance of aviation to geography)

B.           Major sectors affiliated with Aviation

C.           Aviation in B.C

D.           Impact of Aviation on the economy of B.C

E.            Effect of Aviation on the climate of B.C

F.            Discussion

G.           Conclusion

H.           References

A.     Aviation

                         i)        Definition

                        ii)        aviation to geography

 

B.     Major sectors affiliated with Aviation

                         i)        Tourism

                        ii)        Business

                       iii)        Social

                       iv)        Education

 

C.     Aviation in B.C

                         i)        An aviation strategy for British Columbia

                        ii)        B.C. Air Access Program

 

D.      Impact of Aviation on the economy of B.C

 

E.      Effect of Aviation on the climate of B.C

                         i)        Basics of Meteorology

                        ii)        Weather Hazards to Aviation

                       iii)        Weather Patterns of British Columbia

                       iv)        Seasonal Weather and Local Effects

 

F.      Discussion

                         i)        Future of Aviation in B.C

                        ii)        Impact on Climate Change

                       iii)        Recommendation for Future Research

 

G.     Conclusion

                        (i)    Restate topic

                      (ii)    Summarize three main points

 

H.     References

For the Intro, you need to set the scene - which it looks like you're doing. BC and its geography and demographics, what is involved in the aviation industry (why is it needed and growing in BC), and then the 'however, climate change may affect the future of aviation in BC' type statement to help introduce the other main component of the paper. Some stats can be presented in the intro but not too many - just enough to help the reader understand and appreciate the importance of your topic.

Further stats and depth can come in during the background and other sections in the main body. Make sure to include the main drivers for aviation (i.e. what enables aviation, what are the reasons for aviation use and expansion) - this could be population, expansive geographic extents in Canada that require a plane, infrastructural preferences for aviation (instead of a car, boat, or rail), and more if needed.

Your outline looks really good and I'm excited to read more! Good work, and please let me know if you want to discuss your paper further.


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