Prompt 1: What is the most significant revision that your partner must make to his or her draft in order to improve it? For example, this revision could be improving organization, adding more sources, incorporating additional summary and analysis of the s
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Prompt 1: What is the most significant revision that your partner must make to his or her draft in order to improve it? For example, this revision could be improving organization, adding more sources, incorporating additional summary and analysis of the sources, integrating personal response (opinion) throughout the body paragraphs, etc. In what ways could your partner improve or revise his or her introductory paragraph? Does your partner identify clearly his or her topic in the introduction? Does your partner include at least one or two sources in his or her paper? If he or she has incorporated sources in the rough draft, does the draft include sufficient summary and analysis of the sources and the different viewpoints about the topic? Has he or she integrated any personal response either to the topic or the sources? Prompt 2: In what ways could the organization of the paper be revised and improved? For example, revising and improving the organization could be in terms of breaking or expanding body paragraphs, adding topic or concluding sentences to body paragraphs, including more sentences of analysis or personal perspective to balance quotations and summary of sources, etc. Please be specific in your response and explain how your partner could remedy this problem. Prompt 3: What aspects of your partner’s draft are most effective and why?
