Pulliam, Ieva, and Burlew (2017) recommended that future studies
be completed on minority female college students’ perceptions of their careers
and how those perceptions impacted them. [DM1] To
provide a significant response to this issue, this research will explore
whether there are correlations between African American female college students
perceived career barriers and their self-efficacy in making career decisions[DM2] . [DM3] In
other words, this study asks if college students’ awareness of barriers to their
career progression relates to how they perceive their ability to build a career
after college. This study focuses on African-American college women in
predominantly white universities (PWI[DM4] )
to shed light on this population’s experiences.
Research is needed [DM5] to
address how African American female college students’ perceptions of career
barriers are correlated with their self-efficacy for career decision-making
(Pulliam et al., 2017). Prior research indicates that cultural characteristics may
directly influence the presence of perceived career barriers (Albert & Luzzo, 1999[DM6] ;
Lent, Brown, & Hackett, 2002; Luzzo & McWhirter, 2001[DM7] ).[DM8]
African American women face barriers in life posed by
factors such as sexism, colorism, and racism, even when many people believe those
hindrances are no longer present (Sims, & Hirudayaraj, 2016). Bradley
(2019) conducted a study to examine the career paths, barriers, and
professional experiences of African American community college students. Bradley
(2019) found that African American women still faced obstacles [DM9] in
their struggle to excel in their careers and professional lives. Holloway-Friesen
(2018) established that perceived career barriers among African American women could
be predicted based on sex and college environment. [DM10] African American female college students experienced
barriers [DM11] to career progression (Bradley, 2019).
African American women face barriers to career advancement that include
receiving less support from their managers and fewer sponsorships from
employers compared to other groups of women (Hunter-Gadsden, 2018).
Having
coping skills is vital to overcoming barriers in daily life. Literature shows
that African American women have developed coping strategies [DM12] to overcome barriers to career progression (Greer
& Cavalhieri, 2019).[DM13] Hope, Velez, Offidani-Bertrand, Keels, and Durkee (2018) investigated
whether there is a relationship between political activism as a protective
factor against experiences of racial/ethnic discrimination. The results
indicated that there is a significant relationship [DM14] between political activism and the
level of stress and anxiety among African American students (Hope et al.,
2018). Hope et al. (2018) suggested that future studies should seek a deeper
understanding of how students vary coping strategies with respect to the
barriers they face. Kim and O’Brien (2018) investigated the measures of
perceived career barriers across ethnic minority women. The results of the
study highlighted the need to identify and measure salient barriers for college
women of color. There
is a need to determine if there is a relationship between barriers and coping
skills to the career progression of African
American female[DM15] college students.[DM16]
[DM1]The
deleted sentence was redundant.
[DM2]Later,
you move your focus to coping skills. Make sure to maintain a consistent focus
throughout the paper.
[DM3]The
deleted sentence was redundant.
[DM4]Should
this be “U” for universities?
[DM5]It
is not enough to say that it is needed. You also need to say why it is needed.
What changes could this information encourage? Also, be sure that this
statement matches your actual topic (actual career progress, coping mechanisms).
[DM6]This
source is missing from your reference list.
[DM7]This
source is missing from your reference list.
[DM8]Take
this further to discuss the significance of this statement.
[DM9]Such
as?
[DM10]I
moved this sentence up from the next paragraph since it concerns barriers.
[DM11]Indicate
what those barriers are. Provide some examples to illustrate the point with a
clause like “such as…”
[DM12]Such
as?
[DM13]Coping
skills now seem tangential to your purpose, which as stated above, is to
perceived barriers and self-efficacy. It’s not clear how this relates now that
you have changed your project. Maintain a single, consistent focus throughout
the paper.
[DM14]In
what direction? Did activism guard against discrimination?
[DM15]I
used African American female for adjective forms and African American women for
noun forms.
[DM16]There
is a need to do this in order for what to occur? You still need to explain why
there is a need.
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