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1. Pick one of the
topics below, and write one preliminary essay (one-sentence thesis statement
separated from and followed by three supporting paragraphs of 5-7 sentences
each).
2. Remember to
develop a strong thesis that contains the controlling idea and opinion of your
preliminary essay. Subsequently, the topic sentences and supporting points of
your body paragraphs should clearly reinforce your thesis.
3. Use two paraphrased ideas
from the reading in your preliminary essay. When you integrate paraphrased
content, remember to include a lead-in (e.g., according to the author) before
the paraphrased content. In addition, you should include an in-text citation
after the paraphrased content. An example of an in-text citation is as follows:
(Lipschutz, 2017). You should also create a reference page with an entry to
acknowledge the source of the reading. You will find the content for the
reference entry underneath the reading simply copy it to your test as your
reference.
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do so, complete pre-writing, outlining, and drafting (all optional) in the
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writing your good copy, please type “GOOD COPY” and your topic number “Topic
1”, “Topic 2”, or “Topic 3”. Then type your preliminary essay. This will indicate
the preliminary essay that follows is the one to be marked.
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PART A - READING
'Forest Cities':
The Radical Plan to Save China from Air Pollution
By Tom Phillips, The Guardian, February 17, 2017
When Stefano Boeri imagines the future of
urban China he sees green, and lots of it. Office blocks, homes and hotels
decked from top to toe in a verdant blaze of shrubbery and plant life; a breath
of fresh air for metropolises that are choking on a toxic diet of fumes and dust. [1]
Last week, the Italian architect, famed for
his tree-clad Bosco Verticale (Vertical Forest) skyscraper complex in
Milan, unveiled plans for a similar project in the eastern Chinese city of
Nanjing. [2]
The Chinese equivalent – Boeri’s first in
Asia – will be composed of two neighbouring towers coated with 23 species of
tree and more than 2,500 cascading shrubs. The structures will reportedly house offices, a 247-room luxury hotel,
a museum and even a green architecture school, and are currently under
construction, set for completion next year. [3]
But Boeri now has even bolder plans for
China: to create entire “forest cities” in a country that has become synonymous
with environmental degradation and smog. [4]
“We have been asked to design an entire
city where you don’t only have one tall building but you have 100 or 200
buildings of different sizes, all with trees and plants on the facades,” Boeri
told the Guardian. “We are working very seriously on designing all the
different buildings. I think they will start to build at the end of this year.
By 2020 we could imagine having the first forest city in China.” [5]
Boeri described his “vertical forest” concept
as the architectural equivalent of a skin graft, a targeted intervention
designed to bring new life to a small corner of China’s polluted urban sprawl.
His Milan-based practice claimed the buildings would suck 25 tons of carbon
dioxide from Nanjing’s air each year and produce about 60 kg of oxygen every
day. [6]
“It is positive because the presence of such
a large number of plants, trees and shrubs is contributing to the cleaning of
the air, contributing to absorbing CO2 and producing oxygen,’ the architect
said. “And what is so important is that this large presence of plants is an
amazing contribution in terms of absorbing the dust produced by urban traffic.”
[7]
Boeri said, though, that it would take more
than a pair of tree-covered skyscrapers to solve China’s notorious pollution crisis. “Two towers in a huge urban
environment [such as Nanjing] is so, so small a contribution – but it is an
example. We hope that this model of green architecture can be repeated and
copied and replicated.” [8]
If the Nanjing project is a skin graft,
Boeri’s blueprints for “forest cities” are more like an organ transplant. The
Milan-born architect said his idea was to create a series of sustainable
mini-cities that could provide a green roadmap for the future of urban China.
[9]
The first such settlement will be located in
Luizhou, a mid-sized Chinese city of about 1.5 million residents in the
mountainous southern province of Guangxi. More improbably, a second project is
being conceived around Shijiazhuang, an industrial hub in northern China that
is consistently among the country’s 10 most polluted cities. [10]
Compared with the vertical forests, these
blueprints represent “something more serious in terms of a contribution to
changing the environmental urban conditions in China,” Boeri said. Boeri,
60, first came to China in 1979. Five years ago he opened an office in
Shanghai, where he leads a research program at the city’s Tongji University.
[11]
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